Yes, it is much improved!
Two last questions. I can now glue the shower drain assembly to the vertical stub and concrete it, but I was also thinking about allowing for any settling that might stress the P trap configuration, as I am slab on grade.
First, I was planning to wrap the vertical pipe coming up from the P trap to the pipe coming down from the drain assembly with a layer or two of 1/8" flexible foam sheeting (sill wrap?) so that the concrete wasn't right up against the ABS. I assume that is recommended practice...or code?
Second, instead of solvent welding the vertical pipe to the shower drain assembly, would there be any benefit in simply connecting the two vertical pieces with a banded or no hub coupling? Would that allow a little movement to occur if the piping in the sand/soil dropped in relation to the drain assembly encased in 4" of concrete slab? Or do those couplings resist any movement once they are tightened? Or am I over-engineering this?